want some tips?
Video quality: I'm not gonna watch a 480p lets play, bare minimum is 720p for me with preferred 1080p
Narration: Talking about "we", "our" and "us" is fine (good actually) but if you do that talk to us instead of just narrating what you are doing, I can see what you are doing. (Don't take this wrong, narrating what you do is fine, but constantly doing that gets boring)
Also think of subjects you want to talk about, put em on a paper and do talk about em (gather news, talk about minecraft stuff, opinions (but not indoctrinated))
Turn off your phone!
Viewers feel like you don't have full attention to the game and talking to the viewers.
Also introduce yourself, you just started and I don't know you, I don't know why you do a lets play, I don't know why you chose tekkit and some people don't know what tekkit is.
Add a personal flavour to a lets play.
Something only you do. Make it personal and interesting to watch.
Why should I watch YOUR lets play and not someone else's?
I really suggest shooting a couple of test video's.
Watch the quality, re watch the video and see if you actually enjoy watching it.
Do this until the videos are up to your standards and then show them to a small group
greetz and good luck,
Astraeasan