Grade 8 Story.

[MsCommanderFluffy]

Now, Commander works as security and had found a grade 8's story crumpled folded and left on the floor.

Here is the said story:

Long Long Long Long time ago.
there was a PS3and a Xbox 360 they were best friends intell.
One day Someone by the name of COD.
So the Xbox360 want to be best friends so the Xbox360 went up to the PS3.
The Xbox360 said to the PS3, so the Xbox360 said we can't be friends anymore.
So the PS3 storm out. Xbox 360 was all happy.
But they both ruled the land and the PS3 forgot about that.
So he sent a note to the xbox360 that he wants duel.
The xbox360 said sure. The PS3 said ok.
The PS3 sent another note said on November 7 there's going to be a deul.
So he sent. The xbox 360. He was the fast on earth and in the universe. So the xbox360 train for a year. There a giant screen. And on it was a game name COD who ever wins owns the land. 30 minutes later the PS3 Wins the Xbox360 got so mad that threw the PS3 so high thats makes a picture with the stars.

The end.

Now.. I couldn't grasp the story.. but it made me lol.

 

[alien12]

That doesn't make any sense at all.
Although i'd have to agree it was funny, and completely random.

Great find though xD

 

[BeuTube]

Haha what on earth?

 

[Godspeedz]

Clearly a first grader wrote that story. Horrible grammar, lol.

 

[staticfactory]

BLOODY BRILLIANT! Get that kid a book deal.

 

[lukester247]

Hahaha.. that's interesting? And complete nonsense. I hope no one in 8th grade wrote that story. Being in grade 8... well... I guess that's possible for some 8th graders... nonetheless, hilarious

 

[seattlewil]

I love the symbolism, really very meaningful xD

Haha, great find!

 

[CommanderFluffy]

was in a middle school grade 8 creative writing classroom

 

[Autom3]

i heard that in England they don't even learn grammar...

 

[Tiggerxplur]

it was probably his little brothers

 

[michaelavena]

No Comment

 

[BedrockBlaster82]

Hmmmm, anyone else think that CommanerFluffy wrote this on his own?

 

[Autom3]

*Like*

 

[alien12]

Hmmmm, anyone else think that CommanerFluffy wrote this on his own?

Awww, dont be so nasty !
Not his fault he can't spell... well actually it is, but you get the idea.

 

[Tiggerxplur]

Hmmmm, anyone else think that CommanerFluffy wrote this on his own?

Awww, dont be so nasty !
Not his fault he can't spell... well actually it is, but you get the idea.

haha i have to agree with bedrock

 

[ekover97]

hahaha this is hilarious. This doesnt really seem like an 8th grader wrote it, but who knows. It probably was Commander.... xD. Hahah i totally lol'd.

 

[kking1]

war is a sad ordeal

 

[ekover97]

Yes it is.

 

[YourMacManDan]

Clearly a first grader wrote that story. Horrible grammar, lol.

It is called the American School System.

 

[ekover97]

It is called the American School System.

Tell me about it.